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“This will cure your mother’s ailment.” The doctor tore open the strange, red, prickly egg. Was this thing an egg, a flower, a fruit, an animal? The long, thin red hairs that covered it wriggled furiously. My uncertainty and disgust must have been plainly written on my face as the doctor assured me that, “This will work. Trust me.”
“She just has to eat the little red seeds?”
“Yes. They will taste a little bitter. Just do not eat the hairs. They are poisonous.”
I reached out hesitantly to take the fruit-thing. “Thank you.” The hairs tickled my hand and I nearly dropped it. Dropping it into my purse, I took out some coins to pay the doctor. When I placed the coins into the doctor’s hands, I noticed that the fruit had streaked my palms with red. I thought of my mother coughing up blood at home. Shivers ran down my spine.
“I assure you its her best chance. Do not worry,” the doctor said as she pocketed her coins.
“Okay,” I whispered. Trust the doctor. Just trust the doctor.
– Ermisenda Alvarez
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Always trust a doctor, unless it’s me ;-).
Here’s mine http://joe2stories.wordpress.com/2014/10/12/picture-it-and-write-find/
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Outstanding. 🙂
Happy to be joining the Creative Collective today! http://shandraharris.wordpress.com/2014/10/12/the-hand-of-god-the-broken-hearted-picture-it-write/
We were standing in the garden of wild fruits. For some time, this has been my favorite place to go. It was a place full of hopeful promises. New fruit breeds that could feed thousands.
Tears have dried on my cheeks while I’ve been waiting for a reply from Mama Josie. She wasn’t my real mama, but more of a shared mother to the countless orphans.
I fear she is so angry with my proclamation she’ll never speak to me again. I’ve decided to sell myself for money. I’m not worth much else and at least this way I could provide for my siblings.
She reached down and plucked a red fruit. Splitting it I saw the round plump nutritious seeds.
“Child, these seeds are like the gifts of your soul.”
I looked at her in confusion
“We all have gifts. Yours is compassion and an unconditional love for others. If you do this horrible thing, you will replace your seeds with black ones. Your soul will be full of hate and despair.”
She had tears in her eyes and I looked away.
“You will no longer be you. Do you still wish to do this?”
Shaking my head no, she placed the fruit in my hand.
“Use your gifts and find another way.”
Thank you for another inspiring picture/writing prompt. I also posted this to my page and linked back your this page 🙂
A nice lesson. Well done.
Thank you
Really nice pie Eating~Well written!~:)
That should read~ Nice piece ~ Well written ~ Sad spellchecker is sorry ~
Thank you for the kind words and for some reason I thought that was a saying 🙂 “really nice pie eating”
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Here’s my contribution.
DJ
http://msudlj.com/2014/10/13/living-in-darkness/
Here is my fantasy on a dream~
http://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2014/10/13/picture-it-and…eds-of-release/
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