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I urge people to join in, comment with your paragraph of fiction to accompany the image. It doesn’t have to follow my story or reflect the same themes. It can be a poem or in a different language (provide a translation please ). Anyone who wants to join in, is welcome. This photograph will be reblogged under Ermisenda on tumblr and added to the Picture it & Write gallery on Facebook and Pinterest.
Please continue to write however you’re inspired, but add a tag to the beginning of your post if there’s mature content in order to keep Picture it & Write an engaging event for all of our followers.
The walls and floors vibrated. The roar of crumbling rocks filled my ears and I scrambled back into a dark corner of the cave. My eyes twitched as blades of light pierced the wall and hit me in the face and body. Laughing hysterically, I shielded my face from the pieces of flying rock. When I brought my arms down, I couldn’t see for what seemed like forever. I was blind. The light was too bright but I was still smiling.
Then I could see. The cold outside world had greeted us again. I looked over to the person who I had been trapped with for the past weeks. Could we just go on with our lives after all that happened? I flinched at the memories, my smile was no more.
– Ermisenda Alvarez
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Powerful. I really like how simple but strong this poem is. Thanks for contributing this week to Picture it & write!
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Love the photo, here’s my contribution – thanks for the spark!
http://klewismusings.wordpress.com/2014/02/23/the-cave/
I feel like this short story was a great metaphor for obstacles in our life. For rising to the challenge when we need to. And hopefully having someone to support us through it. Lovely contribution! Thanks for sharing. 🙂
You’re welcome. Thanks for reading and responding with your thoughts here. I love the challenges you put up.
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*shudders* so eerie! so potent
I’m glad the creepy atmosphere came through in my writing. Thanks for commenting! 🙂
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Thanks for the great photo! Here’s my piece:
http://lldfiction.wordpress.com/2014/02/25/moving-on/
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