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Tomorrow is Eliabeth’s review of Farsighted by Emlyn Chand. Today, we’re posting a related excerpt. It is a particularly interesting book for us because the narrator is blind. In this paranormal young adult novel, Alex Kosmitoras can still “see” things others can’t. When his unwanted visions of the future begin to suggest that the girl he likes could be in danger, he has no choice but to take on destiny and demand it reconsider.
an excerpt from Farsighted, chapter 3
I sulk into school the next day, irritated about the way my brain’s been malfunctioning lately and embarrassed by how I’ve been around Simmi. The last thing I need is more problems. I head into first period attempting to disappear. No such luck.
“You better watch yourself, Kosmitoras,” Brady Evans growls. I wasn’t even aware he had entered the class, but now here he is, uncomfortably close to my desk.
I don’t say anything. I don’t want to encourage him. Even the slightest word taken out of context might set him off. The bell rings, but the teacher hasn’t come in yet. The other students are milling about, whispering excitedly.
“You’re lucky you’re a cripple, freak, or I’d—” Brady says. Why is he still here? I didn’t do anything to make him angry. Some of the students start taunting Brady, telling him to throw a punch at me. Brady laughs; clearly he loves the attention.
After a moment, the whispering stops. Brady’s moved away from my desk so fast I hardly even realized it. I decide to let the whole thing go, but then footsteps come toward me again, carrying with them the scents of Axe deodorant spray and dried sweat. Brady seems intent on a confrontation. Well, I wouldn’t want to disappoint him.
Slyly, I nudge the end of my cane across my seat and into the aisle. Not sticking out far enough to be noticed but still far enough to get in the way.
Thud! Brady trips and falls headlong down the aisle.
Ha, always wanted to do that. Sometimes blindness comes in handy. No one would ever guess this wasn’t an accident.
“You better watch yourself, Kosmitoras,” Brady growls, back on his feet now.
“You better watch yourself, Evans,” I hiss back, drawing out the S at the end of Evans. I’m a venomous cobra, ready to spring at the slightest hint of danger.
The bell rings. Wait didn’t the bell already ring? Haven’t I been here before?
The other students in the class are milling about, whispering excitedly.
“You’re lucky you’re a cripple, freak, or I’d—” Brady says.
“Or what?” I challenge, rising to my feet while wrapping my knuckles around the handle of my cane and solidifying my grip. I’ve had enough, and besides, what have I got to lose by standing up to him? If anything, a fight with Brady could improve my social standing.
The whispering grows louder. Some of the students start taunting Brady, telling him to throw a punch at me.
Brady laughs arrogantly, “or I’d make you sorry.” He cracks his knuckles as if his words weren’t clear enough.
“I’m not a cripple, but I am going to make you sorry,” I shout, bringing the end of my cane down hard on Brady’s toes.
I can tell it hurt, but Brady doesn’t make any noise to indicate it. He’s too much of a tough guy. Instead, he punches me in the stomach.
I don’t feel anything except a pulsing pain in my middle. And anger, a lot of anger. I raise my cane again and thwack Brady higher up—his face, his neck, I don’t care as long as it hurts.
This time he cries out in pain.
Now, I’m laughing. This is what he deserves, since he just couldn’t leave me alone.
The teacher comes into the classroom. The other students grow quiet, waiting to find out what she’ll do.
Brady punches me in the nose. There’s a crack as he makes contact with the bone. Blood spurts out from my nostrils and flows into my mouth—guess I’ve gotten my daily dose of iron now. I almost throw up, but before I can, the teacher is pulling me and Brady out of the classroom by the collars of our shirts and walking us down the hall toward the principal’s office.
Blog Tour Notes
THE BOOK: Alex Kosmitoras may be blind, but he can still “see” things others can’t. When his unwanted visions of the future begin to suggest that the girl he likes could be in danger, he has no choice but to take on destiny and demand it reconsider. Get your copy today by visiting Amazon.com’s Kindle store or the eBook retailer of your choice. The paperback edition will be available on November 24 (for the author’s birthday).
THE CASH PRIZES: Guess what? You could win a $100 Amazon gift card as part of this special blog tour. That’s right! Just leave a comment below saying something about the post you just read, and you’ll be entered into the raffle. I could win $100 too! Please help by voting for my blog in the traffic-breaker poll. To cast your vote, visit the official Farsighted blog tour page and scroll all the way to the bottom. Thank you for your help with that. We are listed as “Ermilia.”
THE GIVEAWAYS: Win 1 of 10 autographed copies of Farsighted before its paperback release by entering the giveaway on GoodReads. Perhaps you’d like an autographed postcard from the author; you can request one on her site.
THE AUTHOR: Emlyn Chand has always loved to hear and tell stories, having emerged from the womb with a fountain pen grasped firmly in her left hand (true story). When she’s not writing, she runs a large book club in Ann Arbor and is the president of author PR firm, Novel Publicity. Emlyn loves to connect with readers and is available throughout the social media interweb. Visit www.emlynchand.com for more info. Don’t forget to say “hi” to her sun conure Ducky!
MORE FUN: There’s more fun below. Watch the live action Farsighted book trailer and take the quiz to find out which character is most like you!
Want to find out which Farsighted character you are? Take this quiz.

Did you get the same character as either Eliabeth (Alex) or Ermisenda (Dax)? Let us know which Farsighted character you are.
I went through the first four questions on the quiz and gave up. None of the answers apply to me at all. The book sounds like an interesting read though, thanks for sharing!
Thank you for sharing, ladies of Ermilia. Hi, Elia (waves). See, I read your blog!
Hi, Anne. I’m not exactly like any of the characters either. It was important to me to make them all distinct. Just be glad you didn’t get Brady in the quiz 😉
When you’re the topic of conversation 😉 😛
I dunno which is worse to get Dax or Brady *shoots a meaningful look at Ermisenda*
After reading the book I’m surprised I didn’t get Simmi, given her gift, but glad given her personality.
-Elia
Hi Emlyn! Haha, here are my answers. Maybe I can be in your next book!
Most important to me: Self-expression
Favorite food: Ice cream. Not gonna lie.
Biggest flaw: Everything makes me cry. Everything.
Giant crush on a friend: I hide it. Forever.
Found a $50: Donate it to someone who deserves it.
Feel about my parents: They’re a piece of work. I don’t talk to my Dad.
Psychic power: Auto-writing.
You’re half-Simmi, half-Shapri from the looks of it. Oh no, which team will you choose? 😛
The next best answers came up Shapri. 🙂
I’m a Shapri too, but shhh, don’t tell anyone!
Haha, I can keep a secret! I promise!
As long as I’ve got you here, I want to say how important I think it is that you pay attention to keeping your characters distinct. I love that you paid enough attention to it for a personality quiz. I’ve been noticing, especially in the blogosphere, that a lot of writers have characters that all sound the same. I even read a dialogue the other day which went of for a whole page and I had no idea which character was which all the way through it. They were identical.
Ahw, why thank you! Character development is so, so important. I’ve found lately that many authors compromise their characters for the sake of creating a quick-paced plot of or building a complex other world. You can’t skimp on characters–they make or break the story. And, no, it’s not okay to create facsimiles of some other author’s winning character either!
LOL the word NaNoWriMo is just screaming at me right now! I have been beating the same dozen characters to death in my flash fiction posts, just to make sure when I do my final pass through my novel I’ve got them right. I even created a couple of new ones to interact with them! Never thought of the personality chart though. That’s so smart. As useful as an outline. It should probably be moved up to like step 3 in planning your novel. Beginning/ending. Outline. Personalities. 🙂
I think it takes time to get to know your characters. You can’t map them up-front in their entirety. With Farsighted, I didn’t truly know Alex or catch his voice until chapter 3. This meant I had to go back and heavily revise the early chapters once I had met him. Some characters come to you fully formed, like Shapri. Others are damned difficult to get sorted out – like Simmi. It’s a process and a very rewarding one at that!
Yeah I don’t mean mapping them. Just outline why they are who they are and write each character within their outline. Getting to know them is as spontaneous as getting to know you. 🙂
Thanks so much for taking the time for me! ♥
Are you kidding?! I’m a writer, and therefore, want to talk to anyone who is willing when it comes to the craft. Now don’t you have nano to get back to? 😉
Hahaha. You tell her, Elia! But I think it’s much worse to get Brady in the quiz at least. Dax seems to be popular amongst Europeans. And the other two amongst Americans, so there you go 😉
Gee, that does not necessarily bode well. 😛